Wednesday, January 9, 2013

Self introduction

Hello!


      Today I will officially introduce myself.


   As you may already know, my name is Monica. I go to a French school in Seoul, Korea. Almost all the girls there are selfish, weird, and wicked. My best friend, who is also a girl, is fine, but brags a little too much.
  You should have realized I am also a girl by now( you can still chat if you're not).

  My dream is to become a lawyer, despite the fact that my debating skills are not that good. I also want to become an author, but anyone can write a book. A fact is that I type very slowly.
 
  I used to like drawing and reading, but as time passed, I found I preferred running around and playing more(the exact opposite thing happens to normal people).

  Finally, I will confess my age. I'm becoming eleven this year; my birthday is in summer. This makes me instinctively think of Harry Potter(by the way, I also have round glasses and black hair).


            Good luck!


  
  

1 comment:

  1. FIX:
    line 5: debate -> debating
    line 6: add "sad" before "fact"
    line 8: went -> passed
    line 9: prefered -> preferred (spelling)
    line 12: wired -> weird (spelling)

    Wow! You are very good at English. You know the grammar and you write neatly. I'm impressed! Just change a few mistakes and you're fine.
    I hope you don't feel the same way about girls in this camp (or maybe all girls are like that at your age). Your introduction is very colorful and I think your character is, too. Nice to meet you!:)

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